fixing ma script

 Okay, I worked on that one bit of my script that was terrible. Let's compare the before and after. 

So to fix this, I employed this hyper effective super cool strategy. 

Step 1: highlight

Step 2: delete

So then I spent a bit rewriting and came up with this. 

I just think that this conversation flows a lot better between the two. It was kind of hard to write, since this is such a strange exchange, but I think this feels about as natural as it can.